Revised Concept:It was pretty confusing in the animatic, but in the beginning when the narration is going, there will be images that match the story. I don't know if I want them to be animated or if I could just use a moving camera to create a little more visual interest while the narrator is talking.
I don't think I need to revise the character designs, seeing them vectored they seem much different than when they are hand-drawn.
I chose the order they were in based on the relative "size" and "scariness" of the monsters the maidens turn into, but I may re-order them dependent on the pacing of each part, because I like the plot of each individual scenario. I think the way the prince and his party exit the scenes of a lot of them could be reworked and it would help with the pacing and understanding of the story.
At the end to have a little more closure, I think I will have another scene with the storybook from the beginning but this time it will have images of the prince and his unwilling servant as the princess and their "new life" together.
Calendar:November 12 - today
November 19 - all assets finished
December 1 - first rough edit done
December 8 - revised edit
December 101 - Final Edit